The global warming has increase in the last years thanks to the behavior of the humans. This is causing a lot of damage to the nature and animals around the world. One important consequence is that with the big amount of wrong behavior of humans is causing that the ozone layer has been destroyed. This problem is affecting mostly in the poles because the sunlight go directly to it, without any protection the ozone layer used to have a very important paper that was bringing protection to the whole world . There the glaciers that are huge masses of ice are melting faster than the scientists say it should be. This problem is not just about the melting, this is causing more problems, and for example we know that in the poles live many animals such as penguins, polar bears, seal, sea lions etc., the point is that all of them have their habitat in that place, and with the melting they are staying without home, this may even cause the extinction of them. Another problem is that with the melting is causes most of the times floods, and it affects people. All this problems of the global warming are causing many problems, we know that, but it isn’t too late. Nowadays some people are trying to make campaigns with the objective of changing people thoughts about global warming, to give them the correct idea of what it is and what does it causes in nature, this may make a great change in people and it may help the environment to take a big recover.
Luis Fabian Sanabria Jara María Fernanda Mendez Aguilar
I agree with the paragraph they made because they are right in the thing that the ozone layer have been destroy by the actitudes of the people which is basically the contamination of the ground water and air. I also think that its important to highlight that they mention the campaings that now the people make,because I think that its good to be part of the changes.
Yes, I also agree with this paragraph. They said that the world is facing a lot of porblems because of humans activities, and I think that they are right. I also think that the whole paragraph is very good and interesting (let´s say) because it explains all the process that galciers develop because of global warmimng and because of the damage that the ozone layer faces. At finally, I also like that they mention the animals, that are creatures that have been damege a lot.
Nowdays exist many ways to increase the global warming, that produces the fallen of the glaciers. What can we do to increase the global warming? One example can be seeing in the normal waste of energy that the people do everyday in their homes. Although the people are far away of the glaciers with this waste of energy the global warming will increase soon. This affect us in many ways, the level of the ocean is increasing, the temperature is getting hotter every year, the animals that we need in our diet or in other ways are dying, with the global warming we´re hurting ourselves when we hurt the nature. The glaciers that one day help us to regulate the temperature, now are killing us slowly but soon this will be a critical situation, and all is because our guilt. Meanwhile all the people are angry of the situation, before nowbody made consience of their acts and what they made to the nature. But, if we made this situation, we can fix it,but we need the help of all the people and we have to hurry up because everyday this sitation is getting harder and soon will be unstoppable. Now exist recycling programs, however we don´t use it, but if we want a change we need to get the responsability to do it.
Well, I really like it because the things that they mention is exactly chat is happening right now with everything around us, I also agree with them in the part that says that "if we made this situation, we can fix it", because is something that some people may find interesting, and some other may find like if it would be a very like careless idea, but if we try to help the people that care we can fix all the damage that we have done.
I really like this paragraph guys, just because of two main characteristics it has. The first one is that I undestood it in a perfect way, and the other is that you just said or explained the truth about what situation is facing the world. I think it also will be important to say that I agree with Fernanda´s comment. I think that we can´t make the world to became in perfect conditions, but we can fix a lot of problems it has, so, as Jazmin and I said in our paragraph, let´s change the world.
The Global warming is the rise in the average temperature of Earth's atmosphere and oceans.As you may know,and also what this paragraph is mainly about; the global warming affect so many things for example:The glaciers,they are melting and destroying the habit of many animals like polar bears,walrus,penguins,etc....Also,because of the melting of the glaciers the sea level will increase and it will end will floodings all over the world.We have to take this situation into account because the global warming is produce by the human's contamination,so we think that is important to do some little changes like reduce the time at the shower,awareness about the use of the lights and simple things that will help the earth.There are,lots of things that are damaging our home and we have to do things to take care of it! Kevin Guzman. Carolina Fonseca.
Nowadays the world is facing a very big problem, pollution. This problem is cause because of many situations and the most popular one is the human activities. Pollution cannot be seen as many ways. World can have pollution in the air, in its water and also in soils. All this pollution is cause because of industries gases, car gases and other things. Also the majority of things that humans make are causing this problem, for example throwing garbage, wasting energy and many others things. This problem is the responsible of what we call global warming, and global warming is the responsible of many other consequences. One of the most serious consequences is in the glaciers. Because of global warming glacier start to melt some years ago and now many people and some countries are facing a lot of floods, and other consequences. This situation is arriving at some “extremes” and that some countries could disappear. We need to start to change our attitudes, and try to change the world situation. Lets help the world together!
A glacier is a big piece of flooding ice. In the last years they started to melt because of human activities and pollution. Many animals live there and they are suffering the consequences. We know what global warming is, and that this is the cause of the melting. This global warming with the green house effect made or are causing that the glacier melts and the level of the ocean increase faster each day. The earth is warming and not only the glaciers are feeling the consequences, we too. We also know that the principal cause of the desaster are the humans, but we dont want to know or hear that we are destroying the world, so many people just forget about it, but i think that it's time to change the way we see the earth, it is not only a planet, it's our home.
Well, we know that the glaciers are huge pieces of ice. Also we know that are located near of the poles. But nowadays the greenhouse effect is causing the melting of these glaciers. This effect increases the heat of the world. For that reason, every single day the glaciers are breaking and increasing the level of the ocean. The melting of the glaciers affects the animals that live there. Among these animals are polar bears, penguins, seals, sea lions, in others. They are fencing a big change in their habitat. For them is a difficult challenge to survive in those conditions. The only way to protect the glaciers is to reduce the global warming. For that reason we should take some cards in the case. The main way to prevent the global warming is to reduce the gases. The bad gases are: the gases that produce the cars, the aerosols, the gas from the factories, etc. So, if we want beautiful glacier in our world, let’s reduce the use of those gases.
Good job Valeria. Nice ideas and good writing! Be careful with the Spanish interference: "we should take some cards in the case," it is better to say something like this: "we should do something to help our planet." Nice paragraph!
Well, we know that the glaciers are huge pieces of ice. Also we know that are located near of the poles. But nowadays the greenhouse effect is causing the melting of these glaciers. This effect increases the heat of the world. For that reason, every single day the glaciers are breaking and increasing the level of the ocean. The melting of the glaciers affects the animals that live there. Among these animals are polar bears, penguins, seals, sea lions, in others. They are facing a big change in their habitat. For them is a difficult challenge to survive in those conditions. The only way to protect the glaciers is to reduce the global warming. For that reason we should take some cards in the case. The main way to prevent the global warming is to reduce the gases. The bad gases can be: gases that produce the cars, the aerosols, the gas from the factories, etc. So, if we want beautiful glacier in our world, let’s reduce the use of those gases.
The global warming has increase in the last years thanks to the behavior of the humans. This is causing a lot of damage to the nature and animals around the world. One important consequence is that with the big amount of wrong behavior of humans is causing that the ozone layer has been destroyed. This problem is affecting mostly in the poles because the sunlight go directly to it, without any protection the ozone layer used to have a very important paper that was bringing protection to the whole world . There the glaciers that are huge masses of ice are melting faster than the scientists say it should be. This problem is not just about the melting, this is causing more problems, and for example we know that in the poles live many animals such as penguins, polar bears, seal, sea lions etc., the point is that all of them have their habitat in that place, and with the melting they are staying without home, this may even cause the extinction of them. Another problem is that with the melting is causes most of the times floods, and it affects people. All this problems of the global warming are causing many problems, we know that, but it isn’t too late. Nowadays some people are trying to make campaigns with the objective of changing people thoughts about global warming, to give them the correct idea of what it is and what does it causes in nature, this may make a great change in people and it may help the environment to take a big recover.
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María Fernanda Mendez Aguilar
Very nice paragraph guys! Good job! Let's wait for your classmates' feedback!
DeleteVery nice ideas guys! Well done :)
DeleteI agree with the paragraph they made because they are right in the thing that the ozone layer have been destroy by the actitudes of the people which is basically the contamination of the ground water and air. I also think that its important to highlight that they mention the campaings that now the people make,because I think that its good to be part of the changes.
DeleteYes, I also agree with this paragraph. They said that the world is facing a lot of porblems because of humans activities, and I think that they are right. I also think that the whole paragraph is very good and interesting (let´s say) because it explains all the process that galciers develop because of global warmimng and because of the damage that the ozone layer faces. At finally, I also like that they mention the animals, that are creatures that have been damege a lot.
DeleteNowdays exist many ways to increase the global warming, that produces the fallen of the glaciers. What can we do to increase the global warming? One example can be seeing in the normal waste of energy that the people do everyday in their homes. Although the people are far away of the glaciers with this waste of energy the global warming will increase soon. This affect us in many ways, the level of the ocean is increasing, the temperature is getting hotter every year, the animals that we need in our diet or in other ways are dying, with the global warming we´re hurting ourselves when we hurt the nature. The glaciers that one day help us to regulate the temperature, now are killing us slowly but soon this will be a critical situation, and all is because our guilt. Meanwhile all the people are angry of the situation, before nowbody made consience of their acts and what they made to the nature. But, if we made this situation, we can fix it,but we need the help of all the people and we have to hurry up because everyday this sitation is getting harder and soon will be unstoppable. Now exist recycling programs, however we don´t use it, but if we want a change we need to get the responsability to do it.
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Edwin Obando
Nice ideas guys! Good job! Let's see what your classmates have to tell you about this paragraph!
DeleteWell, I really like it because the things that they mention is exactly chat is happening right now with everything around us, I also agree with them in the part that says that "if we made this situation, we can fix it", because is something that some people may find interesting, and some other may find like if it would be a very like careless idea, but if we try to help the people that care we can fix all the damage that we have done.
DeleteVery nice paragraph guys :)
DeleteI really like this paragraph guys, just because of two main characteristics it has. The first one is that I undestood it in a perfect way, and the other is that you just said or explained the truth about what situation is facing the world. I think it also will be important to say that I agree with Fernanda´s comment. I think that we can´t make the world to became in perfect conditions, but we can fix a lot of problems it has, so, as Jazmin and I said in our paragraph, let´s change the world.
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ReplyDeleteThe Global warming is the rise in the average temperature of Earth's atmosphere and oceans.As you may know,and also what this paragraph is mainly about; the global warming affect so many things for example:The glaciers,they are melting and destroying the habit of many animals like polar bears,walrus,penguins,etc....Also,because of the melting of the glaciers the sea level will increase and it will end will floodings all over the world.We have to take this situation into account because the global warming is produce by the human's contamination,so we think that is important to do some little changes like reduce the time at the shower,awareness about the use of the lights and simple things that will help the earth.There are,lots of things that are damaging our home and we have to do things to take care of it!
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Carolina Fonseca.
Nowadays the world is facing a very big problem, pollution. This problem is cause because of many situations and the most popular one is the human activities. Pollution cannot be seen as many ways. World can have pollution in the air, in its water and also in soils. All this pollution is cause because of industries gases, car gases and other things. Also the majority of things that humans make are causing this problem, for example throwing garbage, wasting energy and many others things. This problem is the responsible of what we call global warming, and global warming is the responsible of many other consequences. One of the most serious consequences is in the glaciers. Because of global warming glacier start to melt some years ago and now many people and some countries are facing a lot of floods, and other consequences. This situation is arriving at some “extremes” and that some countries could disappear. We need to start to change our attitudes, and try to change the world situation.
ReplyDeleteLets help the world together!
Fiorella Agostini.
Jazmín Gómez.
Great job guys! You wrote really nice paragraphs and reactions on your classmates' work! Keep it up! =)
ReplyDeletePlease remind the rest of your classmates who haven't posted anything that they really have to do it!
A glacier is a big piece of flooding ice. In the last years they started to melt because of human activities and pollution.
ReplyDeleteMany animals live there and they are suffering the consequences.
We know what global warming is, and that this is the cause of the melting.
This global warming with the green house effect made or are causing that the glacier melts and the level of the ocean increase faster each day. The earth is warming and not only the glaciers are feeling the consequences, we too.
We also know that the principal cause of the desaster are the humans, but we dont want to know or hear that we are destroying the world, so many people just forget about it, but i think that it's time to change the way we see the earth, it is not only a planet, it's our home.
I like the message,is nice to work with you. :]
DeleteWell, we know that the glaciers are huge pieces of ice. Also we know that are located near of the poles. But nowadays the greenhouse effect is causing the melting of these glaciers. This effect increases the heat of the world. For that reason, every single day the glaciers are breaking and increasing the level of the ocean. The melting of the glaciers affects the animals that live there. Among these animals are polar bears, penguins, seals, sea lions, in others. They are fencing a big change in their habitat. For them is a difficult challenge to survive in those conditions. The only way to protect the glaciers is to reduce the global warming. For that reason we should take some cards in the case. The main way to prevent the global warming is to reduce the gases. The bad gases are: the gases that produce the cars, the aerosols, the gas from the factories, etc. So, if we want beautiful glacier in our world, let’s reduce the use of those gases.
ReplyDeleteGood job Valeria. Nice ideas and good writing! Be careful with the Spanish interference: "we should take some cards in the case," it is better to say something like this: "we should do something to help our planet." Nice paragraph!
DeleteWell, we know that the glaciers are huge pieces of ice. Also we know that are located near of the poles. But nowadays the greenhouse effect is causing the melting of these glaciers. This effect increases the heat of the world. For that reason, every single day the glaciers are breaking and increasing the level of the ocean. The melting of the glaciers affects the animals that live there. Among these animals are polar bears, penguins, seals, sea lions, in others. They are facing a big change in their habitat. For them is a difficult challenge to survive in those conditions. The only way to protect the glaciers is to reduce the global warming. For that reason we should take some cards in the case. The main way to prevent the global warming is to reduce the gases. The bad gases can be: gases that produce the cars, the aerosols, the gas from the factories, etc. So, if we want beautiful glacier in our world, let’s reduce the use of those gases.
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Valeria Cortés
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